Score: 9

"Short but f*cking brilliant!"

submission: boy jesus

date: December 17, 2009

This really shows that jesus was a kid too and that nobody is perfect. He was human after all.

But i still wonder: how many times did he kill that bird before? :p

Score: 7

"Looks promissing"

submission: Tir Na Nog : Episode 1

date: November 17, 2009

Looks nice and clean, no real sloppy parts in it. Only visual part that i didn't like was when you zoomed in on the sprites, they looked kinda blurry. I think it would be better i you'd leave the sprites in solid pixels instead of letting them get smoothed.

And i don't wanna be a prick, but i think the music choice was rubbish. The first and the last songs were pretty good as they didn't sound too bad and fitted in the situation pretty well, but the second and third sounded absolutely horrible and they didn't fit the scene verry well.

I also didn't get much of the story. I'll let that slip because you already told us so and i'll expect it to be clearer the next time, But...(yes there's a but) i think you should find a way too cut down on the filesize so you can put more into one episode, because this one didn't really show that much, it did make me curious for the next one though. I suggest doing something about the audio since that's often the reason for a big filesize (i know because i had that problem myself :p).

Anyways, looking forward to understanding a bit more of the story and watching the fighting scene on the next episode.

Score: 6

"aint bad"

submission: Sprite Race Series Ep.1

date: November 3, 2009

But still a few things you might wanna keep in mind for your next animation: don't overdo it with the blurr effect, for example: at the beginning when mario was in the back and sonic closer in front, you switched focus by adding a blur to the one not focused on and showed the one focused on without that blur. The idea was good but you only need to add just a tiny bit of that blur to get the right effect.

The last thing: gravity, what do i mean with that? Well, when a character jumps, you use a motion tween to do that. Now that's not a bad thing but you should keep in mind that in the begining of the jump, the character goes up really fast and quickly slows down, then when he falls down his speed increases. You can do that by going to the timeline, klick on a frame between the two keyframes of the motion tween, go to properties and add a number at 'ease'. A positive number when he's going up and a negative number when he's going down. And if that doesn't work for ya, you might do it frame by frame.

Score: 10

"see summary bellow me"

submission: Feels Like Meh (NG Cut)

date: October 27, 2009

Just love this, it's got a really relaxing feel to it. Even when the bass is really out there, it doesn't actually disturb that relaxing vibe.
This is definetly getting a 5/5 and a spot in mah faves.

By the way, is the originall version available for downloading anywhere?

Score: 8

"it's great but could have been so much better"

submission: VOID-Taste for Piano and Drums

date: June 25, 2009

from the begining to 1:45 it was really nice... for an intro. And then the whole thing got started and it got truly awesome, but it lasted only 45 secondes. That's such a waste man!

You might wanna cut the intro a bit shorter and make the last part a whole lot longer. And when the drums come in at 1:45 (when it get's started) it might be nice if you added a piano as the main melody and maybe a bass guitar to support the whole thing.

I really hope to hear an improved and extended version of this one becuase it's really good but i think it's just not finished yet.

Score: 10

"and as a finishing touch, god created the dutch!"

submission: ParagonX9 - Chaoz Airflow

date: June 23, 2009

awesome DnB track, but i don't think it's style is very similar to chaoz fantasy. I think this one sounds more mature and more serious, wich is better :p

Thanks dudette, you're making my mp3 player smile again.