I like the change. Linework looks cleaner too me. And the curves from the linework look smoother without the eyes being practically fully round circles.
And all in all just a better readable and more interresting expression on her face like this
I like the change. Linework looks cleaner too me. And the curves from the linework look smoother without the eyes being practically fully round circles.
And all in all just a better readable and more interresting expression on her face like this
Looks fun, lots of stuff going on too look at. Line and shape-work can always be better, but that should be a matter of time.
One thing i think could use some attention is the color levels and contrast. Cause it might be fine when looking with a crisp display under ideal lighting condition. But in my case (kinda shitty phone with daylight) things can be a little hard to see, like the charactere legs and the trees on the left and right. Might be handy to turn the image in black&white/grayscale then see if everything is still as visible as it should be.
Cause there's clearly some effort put into the background as well, shame if peeple have a hard time seeing it.
So I'd either make sure things stand out a bit more from eachother, when it comes to colors, brightness or contrast & all that jazz. Or either simplifying some background elements so its easier to differentiate things by their shapes and silhouettes.
Thanks for the review man, although this piece is 3 1/2 years old and I have plenty of newer pieces on here. ^^; I've made 6 artworks in the past month alone and I kinda did a remake of this for X-Mas last year. https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/g4cesz-official/north-pole-heist
But thanks for taking your time to do a review anyway, it's appreciated nonetheless. ^^
gotta love that what u said. And the fact he has the coolest action bits in the whole show <3
Damn dude, that's bloody enchanting right there!
Thanks man! glad you like it :D
Just had to make it rhyme did't you?
With these lips, Mario's motivation finally makes sence.
Delicious shapes all'round.
Dayum.
That's mighty pretty!
Instantly saved it and set it as my phone's wallpaper for now ';3
That legitimely looks ready to go, to be put into Smash, or like an overhauled remake of SMRPG like Nintendo did with Link's Awakening (should almost be a no-brainer with how SMRPG looked originally, and how nintendo is on a streak of making games look like toys or crafted materials)..
The wood textures look just right for a little toy. Cloth texture on the hat looks good, and the one on the cape (not sure what material the cape is supposed to be, but it looks like the right one).
Only thing I doubt being the right decision is the arm-gun. It looks spot-on to fit with the eastethics, but it might look a little too good for its own good, if you know what I mean. Might have been a good cherry on the cake to have more of an arm-toy-blaster instead of a realistic miniature rifle-head attached.
But that's a matter of style and prefference, you could still try another arm-gun-thing and include a version of that, lol. People do it all the time with lewds anyways, posting same versions of one piece with/without dicks, with/without wet bits or different amounts of clothes.
Ya right about all of that. As for the concept of it itself, I tried to do a mix version between Smashfied version and SMRPG version 3D models, and at the game concept art (and the official arts) shows that Geno's arm-gun is literally like that I did, so I wanted to do it exactly the same way it is.
Thanks for your lovely feedback!
Diabetis never looked so sexy.
No, I'm not THAT happy to see you. It's just a DS in my pocket. Calm down.
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