Guidodinho's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Soinc vs Giriko]

I think you can do way better

I mean, c'mon, if you got your inspiration from SMBZ, that's okay, but this is just done too many times! And i'm getting really tired of these "fan characters". They're not new characters, they're just Sonics or Shadows with more spikes or with clothes on, this was just a withe sonic with a coat and different coloured shoes.
And I not trying to be a hypocrite because my own animations are pretty much all DBZ style too, but try too keep it a little bit originall, use some different characters or backgrounds. And COME ON! The second song!! I know it's a cool song, but it's been used over and over and over so many times that it's just becoming annoying now! And Sonic pulling the 7 emeralds out of his ass and turning into super-sonic, we all saw that comming! Come up with something new, like letting the two fight over the emeralds and collecting them along the fight and letting sonic go super when he gets them all.

Well, that's it for the originality problems, now to the technicall issues.

In the background in begining, you can clearly see a line from where you pasted onther part on, so before you put the back layer of the background in flash, cut the background in paint so that so don't see that line and that the image loops well. And when someone get hits hard, the screen flashes white really fast: don't overuse that, because it gets really annoying and it hurts the eyes when you\re watching it in a darker room and on a bigger screen.
And as for the textbar, use one language, and i recommend only english since most people in other countries (like me) know english and don't know spanish. And having two languages at the same time is just annoying. And i noticed that the music stopped everytime there was any text, so try to cut the music in audacity (or any other program to edit audio) so it loops, and then when you put it in flash, make sure the music is set even instead of stream so the music will go on when there's text.

I hoped this review helped a bit. Because it's clear to see you've got skills. But it's just a shame that it's wasted on something like this.

[Dental Appointment]

great stuff. as usual

Nice to see you're at it. It's also great to see you're getting better and better with each cartoon you post.
But what i liked best is that i heard Tom doing something else instead of...wel...Tom. He sounds really cool as a tooth.

[WGJ4K: Mario Vs Sonic]

Now that's.......

......How a drunk fight is supposed to end!!
(don't mind the grammar, i'm drunk)

[Mario Vs Sonic Entry]

i don't agree

I think the beginning kicks ass, just like the rest of this flash.
And was that ifrureadthisdie's "luffy vs sanji" in the background, at the beginning?

DarkZeroProductionZ responds:

Yes it is, haha...

[Halo: FTS - Tech Trailer]

Looks promissing

Like said before, really looks like south park, but with better graphics.

And i don't think you should change the language to english just because other people are bitching about it. People these days can read, so they should have no problems with subtitles. It's your movie so you should do what YOU want with it.

Anyways, looking forward to the first episode :p

[sssstick fight!]

Cool but not overdone enough.

it's pretty cool to see a remake made by the same person and seeing a lot of improvement. But i think it would be really awesome if you'd overdo the new one, like letting the blue and black dude make wilder slashes and making blood gush all over the place and throwing in slow-mos and that sorta shizzle.

This is pretty addictive to watch though, i watched it like seven times before finally writing this review (i also watched it a couple of times while watching it :p). Kinda like when you make a flipbook animation, you just keep flipping those pages XD

[School 13 - TongueTied]

F*cking awesome

Man, makes me wish there were wishing poles like that in my neighbourhood.

There's a HUGE improvement in your art, the lines themselves are a lot rounder than in your last flash (i want it syndrome). Cuz if you look back at that one you see that the characters are drawn with more straight lines, but in this one they're drawn with more rounded lines, wich looks a lot better.
I also noticed the improvement in the shading, you only worked with two shades of a color before, just the normal color and a darker shade. But now you've added light to it wich makes the whole thing look a hell of a lot better.

Just one question though: why didn't you animate the last part of the bonus stuff?